I like the piece, but . . . two complaints. 1) Her ponytail is hanging horizontally, and the pose in general makes it obvious that she's hanging on to a vertical pole instead of balancing on a horizontal pole (If the pole's horizontal, it looks like she'd roll off the back side of it). 2) I don't know how the cityscape background relates to the figure. Abstract I could deal with, but I find myself asking if there's a window behind her, or if she's just pole dancing in the street and smog has pushed the cityscape back visually, or . . .
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