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:iconlynx-catgirl:
Hello, SOL!
So, this is my third critique and third great work to criticize.
Firstly, I should say I love this sad and blue atmosphere. The wind seems to blow someone's memories away with the merry moments (red balloons) of the Past. The forgotten playground where children used to play sandy castles...
Secondly, colour scheme is well managed. It says the sun in somewhere over the clouds, the weather is windy and cool.
Thirdly, the only thing I notice, that some light sparkles are to appear somewhere in the center of the composition, at least on the metal construction's lower parts because even if the sun is behind the cloudy sky, the lights are not dissapearing. They are still here. This also will give your composition a good final point.
Thank you for the thoughtful artwork, I wish you success in your creations next!
Regards,
Lynx_catgirl

Здравствуй, SOL!
Чтож, это моя третья критика и третья отличная работа для неё.
Во-первых, я должна сказать, что мне очень понравилась эта грустная и печальная атмосфера. Ветер, кажется, сдувает прочь чьи-то воспоминания со счастливыми моментами (в виде красных шаров) Прошлого. Забытая детская площадка, где дети когда-то играли в замки из песка…
Во-вторых, хорошо подобрана цветовая гамма. Она показывает нам, что солнце где-то за облаками, погода ветреная и прохладная.
В-третьих, есть только один момент – сейчас будто блеснут пара бликов в самом центре копозиции, как минимум на металлической конструкции (горке), на перилах в нижней части, ведь даже если солнце находится за облачным небом, свет-то никуда не исчезает. Он все еще здесь. И это также придаст твоей композиции завершающий акцент.
Благодарю за осмысленную работу и желаю в дальнейшем успехов в будущих творениях!
С уважением,
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scratchback Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
This reminds me of the emotional anticipation I would experience before visiting my beloved grandmother as a child. I see this scene years later as an adult and know this time that it is of the past. To feel such emotion again--that sacred anticipation--is magical...
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SilentKittyEater Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
This is beautiful!
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aktell Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
(Twitter Tweet) – Was send on @aktell2007 and @UpperCutArtists - Check out Past by *inSOLense on @deviantART [link]
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SandraVogel Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Professional Photographer
очень понравилась работа!С Наступающим!;)
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SifiyaDay Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Отлично!) Глаза просто счастливы видеть такой спокойный цветовой набор) Единственное что, мне кажется что лестница чуть ближе к нам, чем должна быть)))
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Lynx-Catgirl Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Реалистично так)
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Lynx-Catgirl Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Написать критику на английском или на русском?
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inSOLense Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
на каком тебе удобнее). Спасибо)
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Lynx-Catgirl Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Тогда на двух чтоли...)
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wildwildLizzy Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ok...first of all, I love this.
Second - it reminds me of "hide and seek" by mogenheap.
- I can feel the wind and temperature of the air in this picture which is strangely bleak and lonely exept for the balloons floating there in the stormy sky. the land is barren and sandy looking because maybe there has been a hollocaust?
totally beautiful work
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